This sounded very unsettling and eerie, which I guess was the point and I think you did very well! I like that you literally used the sound of something breaking as a percussive noise throughout the song, it was strange but fitting. The pads are actually very beautiful, and help you catch a break around 2:00 before more kicks in. I also think you did the ending very well because it kinda emphasizes the eeriness even as it's fading out! So amazing work, keep it up :D