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Sounds like a mix between dance and country! Very interesting :)

If you want to make it sound more like wild west though, it would have to be a bit less intense instruments such as electric guitars and trumpets, and have more woodwinds. Thats just my opinion though. Great job on the song!

AlexMaden responds:

Yea I totally agree with you. It got a bit out of hand, and I used too many instruments and kind of lost that Wild West spark it had in the beginning.
Thanks for the feedback though, Always Appreciated!

Sounds cool! Though, I have some suggestions

I think the song could have used more "Dance leads". Just some louder instruments with some interesting melodies to make this song even better. But otherwise, I think you did a great job, keep it up :)

demon1000 responds:

Ok i will see what i can do... Thanks!

This sounds so good! I do have a suggestion though

the cardboard box and sharpies were a great idea, but they could have used a teeny bit of balancing. Maybe a bit quieter, or emit higher frequencies, and less reverb on them (if you used it). But otherwise, the whole piece was awesome and please make more :)

Bitbeak responds:

Thankyou so much for the constructive review!

It was my first time to do non-digital percussion so it's all been an experiment. Will definitely dampen out the reverb a touch next time :D

Oh man I just wish it was a teeny bit longer! Good job, though :)

ANGELGRIS responds:

Thanks a lot man! I was thinking about doing more stuff like this in the future so maybe I´ll re record this same song or do something larger and better.It´s just a mattter of time.Anyway thanks for the review my friend.

Sounds really groovy, and catchy too!

DjAbbic responds:

That's what I was thinking too :D

My only suggestion is to maybe add accompanying tracks with the melody to increase variety, but otherwise great job :)

iViSiONzGD responds:

There are actually 4 tracks, the most I can do with 8 bit music, and there are them:
Sub-Melody
Melody
Bass Line
Percussion

I actually love these "night time" summer songs! Dunno, they just really remind me of the beach at night :)

Look forward to hearing more from you!

TheMagicCape1 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. It's very much appreciated!

Cool song, has a very video-gamey feel to it :P

ThermalLaser responds:

Yeah man! I play video games when i think no one is looking :p

Amazing! Definitely gave me that "space" feeling. Keep it up :)

AlexMaden responds:

Awesome to hear, thanks!

Sounds really game-y! Could be a teeny bit louder, but besides that, sounds like dungeon music of some sort :P

Lanmola responds:

I'm for sure going to work on the volume of the track at some point. Thanks for the review! m(^.^)m

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