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Sounds cool! Though, I have some suggestions

I think the song could have used more "Dance leads". Just some louder instruments with some interesting melodies to make this song even better. But otherwise, I think you did a great job, keep it up :)

demon1000 responds:

Ok i will see what i can do... Thanks!

This sounds so good! I do have a suggestion though

the cardboard box and sharpies were a great idea, but they could have used a teeny bit of balancing. Maybe a bit quieter, or emit higher frequencies, and less reverb on them (if you used it). But otherwise, the whole piece was awesome and please make more :)

Bitbeak responds:

Thankyou so much for the constructive review!

It was my first time to do non-digital percussion so it's all been an experiment. Will definitely dampen out the reverb a touch next time :D

Oh man I just wish it was a teeny bit longer! Good job, though :)

ANGELGRIS responds:

Thanks a lot man! I was thinking about doing more stuff like this in the future so maybe I´ll re record this same song or do something larger and better.It´s just a mattter of time.Anyway thanks for the review my friend.

Sounds really groovy, and catchy too!

DjAbbic responds:

That's what I was thinking too :D

Sounds very nice! Haven't heard these in a long while :)
Looking forward to more of these from you!

Also, mind telling me what xylophone you used, and the instrument you used for the melody?

My only suggestion is to maybe add accompanying tracks with the melody to increase variety, but otherwise great job :)

iViSiONzGD responds:

There are actually 4 tracks, the most I can do with 8 bit music, and there are them:
Sub-Melody
Melody
Bass Line
Percussion

Could have been a little bit longer, otherwise good job! :)

I actually love these "night time" summer songs! Dunno, they just really remind me of the beach at night :)

Look forward to hearing more from you!

TheMagicCape1 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. It's very much appreciated!

Could use a teeny bit more variation, but over all it sounds really cool! Keep up the great work ;)

Cool song, has a very video-gamey feel to it :P

ThermalLaser responds:

Yeah man! I play video games when i think no one is looking :p

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